籌募創業資金
Dear Ms. Thomson,
親愛的湯姆森女士：
I am writing this letter to invite you to become an investor in our upcoming business venture.
寫這封信給您是想邀約您成為我們新創公司的投資者，
investor(n.)投資者venture(n.)冒險（事業）、投機活動、企業business venture創業;商業機會joint venture合資企業venture capital風險資本;投機資本
We approached Paul Smith, our mutual colleague, who suggested that we contact you.
在與我們雙方共同的同事保羅·史密斯商談過後，他建議我們與您聯繫，
mutual(adj.)共同的suggest that S (should) RV 建議某人(應該)….
He said that you are known in the industry for investing in small local businesses with high growth potential.
他說您在業界很有名，專門投資具備高成長潛力的本地小型企業，
potential(n.)潛力
Therefore, we would like to extend an invitation to you to become a partner of our new company, which we believe will be an industry game-changer and an excellent addition to your investment portfolio.
因此我們想邀請您成為我們新公司的夥伴，相信我們的新創公司將能顛覆業界，並為您的投資組合錦上添花。
extend(v.)延長、延期、提供、給予extend opening hours延長營業時間extend my visa簽證延期extending aid to people who have been affected by the earthquake提供地震受災居民幫助extend an invitation to sb. (正式)向某人提出邀請game-changer顛覆(業界)的產品(或事件)portfolio(n.)(個人或機構的)投資組合
After years of research and development, my colleague Jane Darwin and I have come up with an ingenious way to enhance a person’s online role-playing gaming experience.
經過多年的產品研發，我的同事珍·達爾文和我想出了獨創的方法，可提升使用者接觸線上角色扮演遊戲的體驗，
research and development研究與開發come up with~想出;提出(看法、解決方案)ingenious(adj.)(方法等)巧妙的、獨創的role-playing gaming =RPG角色扮演
Using augmented reality, our innovative system will allow users to enjoy games in 3D without the use of fancy gadgets.
使用擴增實境技術，我們創新的系統可讓使用者毋須使用昂貴的裝置，就能享受3D遊戲。
augmented reality 擴增實境gadget(n.)小而精密的電子產品;電子裝置
We hope that you will consider helping us with the startup capital.
希望您能考慮在創業資金方面助我們一臂之力，
startup capital創業資金
Attached is an investment proposal. Please contact us anytime if you have any questions about our product or business plan.
隨信附上我們的創業計畫，如果您對我們的產品或創業計畫有任何問題，歡迎隨時與我們聯絡，
Attached is…隨信附上…attachment(n.)附件investment proposal投資提案
We look forward to meeting you and starting a mutually beneficial business relationship.
我們期盼見到您本人，與您討論如何建立互惠的業務關係。
mutually beneficial 互惠的
Sincerely yours,
誠摯地，
Carol Gates
卡蘿．蓋茲